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THIS WILL GO DOWN ON YOUR PERMANENT RECORD
This trio of Birmingham-based writers performed the piece as part of the Feb. 28 release party for Susannah Felts' novel of the same title. Self is a first-time THE2NDHAND contributor and has appeared in numerous other journals, Dills is editor of THE2NDHAND, and Tucker was the winner of our competition in conjunction with Birmingham's Art Walk fest in 2007. Her story, "318", was published in our 25th broadsheet. Use the flash player for live audio. Or read on....
It wasn't exactly God keeping record, of that much Judith was sure, but someone -- corporeal or no -- was definitely keeping score. In the mornings she woke up and allowed herself exactly 12 minutes of snooze time from her alarm in two six-minute increments. Four swipes of mascara to each set of lashes and one teaspoon of sugar in her morning coffee later she was on her way to work. All day Judith kept tabs. If she hadn't smiled at the receptionist, somewhere points were being deducted from her wavering goodness. After all, if no one watched and accounted, what was the point of anything?
Entering her time in her company's payment system, the refrain played through her head like a children's nursery rhyme: "This, this will go, this will go down on your permanent record." She hit the enter key like the strike of a match and smiled in satisfaction, another task accomplished.
But there were days, weeks even sometimes, when life poured out around her in an uncontrollable flow. Bills were paid late, she cut someone off on her way into the drugstore parking lot, her favorite evening television program was in reruns and nothing she did, not even double-triple-checking to see she had her keys before shutting the car door could staunch the leaking out of all those points she'd accumulated in her favor. In times like this Judith would find herself huddled on the floor of her walk-in closet rationing peanut M&Ms out of a bag, humming her nursery tune to herself, guilt paralyzing her from even being able to knock the rhythm of the chorus to "Hit Me Baby One More Time" on her nightstand before turning out the light to no sleep, no sleep at all.
Only a small part of her knew this might not be the most rational behavior ever exhibited by someone who'd graduated Cum Laude from a mildly renowned institution of higher education. But usually that small portion of her brain was otherwise occupied thinking up ever more intricate tasks that by her completing might save her from causing some terrible tragedy. After her fourth attempt in one afternoon to walk from her cubicle to the bathroom and back without allowing the wales of her corduroys to swish against each other failed, again, of course, Judith felt as if the possibility of her salvation had been buried under a concrete slab. Everyone would know she was a fraud.
Because of Judith children in East Tennessee went unshod, floods covered the Midwest, wars raged in African nations that had been unstable for years and ants drowned in the watering pail she'd let rainwater collect in outside her front door. Some days even an un-rinsed dish spelled out her failure in crusted, hardened cheese. Disaster loomed everywhere, begging to be let in.
*** Billy figured his girlfriend, Catherine, didn't like cigarettes. Who did?
"She doesn't know," he said.
"That's silly," Teri, his roommate, said.
They lived over the café. Billy, the proprietor, had taken Teri on as a tenant when business went south. They sat like this daily, in the afternoon, smoking cigarettes al fresco when the minuscule if not nonexistent lunch crowd disappeared or resumed its nonexistence post-2 p.m. The sidewalk radiated the heat from the summer sun. They smoked, sweat.
"Isn't she meeting you here?" Teri stomped out her cigarette.
"Yeah," he said.
"You got another one of those?"
Billy pulled hard on his cigarette, then: "Sure," he said, placing the pack on the table, looking around the square and fumbling for a match.
She lit her second in as many minutes. "So what's she going to do when she finds out?" she said.
"I don't know," he said. "We've only been going out a month or so."
"She could have ideas. Big ideas -- about you. You might not realize it. Maybe you're her knight, you know, the quintessence of perfection."
He pulled. "I kinda doubt it," he said, blowing smoke.
A homeless man from the church mission shuffled up on the sidewalk behind Billy as he blew another cloud. Teri's eyes went wide as Billy registered a figure's presence at his back and quickly feigned a dramatic cough, doubling over and placing his lit cigarette firmly under his sandal.
"Got an extra cigarette?" the stranger's voice boomed over them.
"Oh yeah, sure," Billy said, sitting back up and proffering the pack. He lifted his sandal and glanced down at the flattened, nearly full-length smoke on the ground.
"What a waste," Teri laughed. "Close call, eh?"
"Yeah, I thought it was her."
"I don't begrudge no man his cigarettes," said the stranger. "I ain't nobody's damn wife." He puffed hard and grinned, returning the pack to its owner, who grinned himself.
"It ain't like that," Billy said.
The stranger held his wide smile and nodded and began to shuffle on, but Billy quickly pulled two cigarettes from the pack, lit one, and urged the old man to take the remainder. "I need to quit," he said.
The stranger would be happy to oblige, he said, but as his hand met the pack his own eyes went wide at the figure of a young woman who had been clomping up the walk quickly only to stop dead in her tracks to witness the transaction.
"Hey," the old man said to her.
"Hey Catherine," Teri said.
And finally Billy turned to see her, his damsel in distress with her eyes pinched down to a scrutinizing slit. He smiled, releasing the pack to the bum and sucking on his newly lit cigarette, quick pulse of his heart in his chest. "How's it going?" he said, pulling, blowing smoke.
Catherine broke from her stock-still stance as the old man shuffled on down the walk. She pulled a chair to the table as Teri lit the last cigarette and Billy went on like all was as anyone could have expected. Thin, awkward smiles passed between the three.
"You got another cigarette?" Catherine asked. "Or did you just give the bum all you had?"
Teri laughed. Catherine scowled. Billy smoked. "I just quit," he said, raising his cigarette and pointing down the walk to the old man.
"You can have mine?" Teri offered, but Catherine winced now like she'd been punched in the stomach.
"This will go down on your permanent record," she said, giving both of them another helping of her slit-eyed disappointment.
Billy shrugged. Teri puffed. All eyes turned to watch the old man shuffle away.
*** NIGHTMARE THE NICK Light creeps in through the cracks around the door. He grabs her around the waist.
She says, "There is nothing sexy about this place."
In the bathroom, they fuck, and she stares at herself in the mirror. She stares at his ugly sideburns. It hurts, then it's over.
She pays her tab, and walks out into the morning. She owes the bartender a dollar.
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